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October 12, 2012
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Darkness surrounds me,
Shadows surround you.
The present threatens me,
as the past did to you.

I cry,
you cry,
I pout,
no doubt.

Your memories, you keep at bay,
but your thoughts just seem to fade away.
Your murdurous thirst is always there
and you seem to be grabbing at your hair.

My thoughts aren't right
my head's too tight,
I have to fight
just not take flight.

I want it to end
I want it to end
Please will somebody help me then?

It's not to late
Never to late
say it'll be alright
but we know it's not alright.

Because of your past,
you will certainly fade last.
You will not find a friend in this world.

We are not one
but one and the same.
Our minds have turned against us.

....Feedback would be nice.
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CheckerBoardJester Oct 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much :)
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:iconshadownelliel:
I adore this it's so beautiful and thought provoking, you did a wonderful job :)
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CheckerBoardJester Oct 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much.
I'm glad you like it so much :)
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:iconshadownelliel:
your welcome,and it really is wonderful :happybounce:
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:iconkittysib:
wow! Intense!:D
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Armandacyd Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely lines!!
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CheckerBoardJester Oct 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much *bows*
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