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October 12, 2012
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Darkness surrounds me,
Shadows surround you.
The present threatens me,
as the past did to you.

I cry,
you cry,
I pout,
no doubt.

Your memories, you keep at bay,
but your thoughts just seem to fade away.
Your murdurous thirst is always there
and you seem to be grabbing at your hair.

My thoughts aren't right
my head's too tight,
I have to fight
just not take flight.

I want it to end
I want it to end
Please will somebody help me then?

It's not to late
Never to late
say it'll be alright
but we know it's not alright.

Because of your past,
you will certainly fade last.
You will not find a friend in this world.

We are not one
but one and the same.
Our minds have turned against us.

....Feedback would be nice.
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theWitchofGrich Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
beautiful :D
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CheckerBoardJester Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much :)
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shadownelliel Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I adore this it's so beautiful and thought provoking, you did a wonderful job :)
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:iconcheckerboardjester:
CheckerBoardJester Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much.
I'm glad you like it so much :)
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shadownelliel Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
your welcome,and it really is wonderful :happybounce:
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KittySib Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
wow! Intense!:D
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Armandacyd Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely lines!!
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CheckerBoardJester Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much *bows*
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